The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.

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The chart illustrates the amount of 5 different kinds of

jams

purchased between 2009 and 2014.

Overall

, the sales of 4

jams

grow by different degrees.

However

, only a plum jam loses its popularity with no sale in the end.

According to

the graph, there is growing consumption of most of the

jams

being compared for the 5 years. The graph for strawberry and grape

jams

has a sharp rise from 3 to 7 and from 0.5 to 4.5 respectively.

This

makes the former the most popular

jams

that are sold in 2014. In spite of the general upward trend, more fluctuation can be seen in the graphs for raspberry and cherry

jams

. In fact, the former indicates some stability from 2005 to 2011 and from 2012 to 2014

whereas

the latter experiences a huge drop in 2011.

Nevertheless

, there is only one graph that demonstrates an opposite tendency throughout the whole period. The sale of plum jam continuously declines and eventually hits the bottom at 0 in 2014 from 2.5 in 2005.

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