The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

The table provides information about the number of people that went abroad in four different

years

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Overall

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, international travel became popular over the

years

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. Comparing the five parts of the world,

whereas

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Europe was the most favourable destination, the Middle East was the least.

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, America was the only place that saw a decrease in 2005. The most visited areas over the

years

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were Europe, Asia and the Pacific. Europe almost doubled their numbers of visitors in 15

years

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spam from 280,2

million

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to 400,2

million

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, followed by Asia and Pacific which

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had a significant increase to 135,8

million

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in 2005 when they were just 60,2

million

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in 1990. The two least visited parts, Africa and the Middle East

also

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had a rise in international travelling,

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however

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the numbers were not that significant. Between 1995 and 2000 America had an increase of more than 6

million

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, but ,

unfortunately

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,unfortunately

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this

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number fell in the following 5

years

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from 118, 2 to 112,2

million

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

162 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

significant increase
international travel
popular destinations
economic growth
technological advancements
ease of travel
cultural exchange
globalization
fluctuations
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millions of travelers
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