The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
The table provides information about the number of people that went abroad in four different
years
.
Overall
, international travel became popular over the years
. Comparing the five parts of the world, whereas
Europe was the most favourable destination, the Middle East was the least. Furthermore
, America was the only place that saw a decrease in 2005.
The most visited areas over the years
were Europe, Asia and the Pacific. Europe almost doubled their numbers of visitors in 15 years
spam from 280,2 million
to 400,2 million
, followed by Asia and Pacific which also
had a significant increase to 135,8 million
in 2005 when they were just 60,2 million
in 1990. The two least visited parts, Africa and the Middle East also
had a rise in international travelling,however
the numbers were not that significant. Between 1995 and 2000 America had an increase of more than 6 Add a comma
,however
million
, but ,unfortunately
Add a comma
,unfortunately
this
number fell in the following 5 years
from 118, 2 to 112,2 million
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