A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Simi and I am writing

this

letter in regard to the advertisement which you have placed in the newspaper for hiring assistance in a restaurant. I want you to know that I am interested in

this

job.I am a student and doing full-time study and with my study, I am working as an associate in

amazon

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Amazon

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furthermore

, I already have some experience in a restaurant for almost 2 years as I worked in Payal Chat house in Surrey as a waitress and a cashier. I would like to consider that I have already attached my resume and certificates which will help you to find the right candidate that you are looking for.I am available part-time only on weekends as I have my school and other work on weekdays. If you consider me a suitable candidate for the position

then

I would be ready for the interview on 26 September at 5 pm. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Simi.

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that you organize your letter clearly by using paragraphs effectively. Each paragraph should present a single idea or theme.

task achievement

Avoid any ambiguity in your schedule or availability. Be clear and precise about when you are available for work and interviews.

task achievement

When expressing your suitability for the job, provide specific examples of relevant skills, or experiences to strengthen your application.

coherence cohesion

Strive for a logical and natural progression of ideas throughout the letter for better cohesiveness.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are appropriate, but they could be improved by addressing a specific person if the name is known or by using a more personalized closing.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

169 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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