The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars, famines, accidents and crime. Why do you think that is? Do you think the news should be a balance of both good and bad news?
More and more negative information is being reported in newspapers nowadays. The particular reason for
this
circumstance is that bad news
is always seen as attractive and tempting, and balancing the optimistic and the pessimistic is necessary since negative news
causes overthinking and worry.
The main reason why articles about wars, accidents, and crime are becoming more viral is that they're often considered hot news
and attract many readers. That is
to say that these articles arouse people's curiosity by using extremely serious words in their titles. As a result
, more individuals are tempted to click on and the authors will gain more fame and money from that. For instance
, CNN, which is often renamed 'Constant negative news
' by many TED talk speakers, is one of the biggest websites for global information.
Having a balance of both good and bad news
should be considered since pessimistic articles are the main causes of overthinking and consternation among silly things. This
is because when people surround their daily lives with negativity, they will be plagued by everything, even the smallest one can ruin their mood and emotions. That's why reading newspapers about positivity will help them keep an open-minded attitude and a bright outlook. For example
, The New York Times contains either podcasts about morning routines, cooking recipes, or breaking news
about social issues, making it one of the most enjoyable websites for readers.
In conclusion, bad news
is increasing in popularity since it attracts lots of newspapers
readers and it is very important to have a balance of both positive and negative reports.Change the noun form
newspaper
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task response
The essay responds well to the task by addressing both why bad news is prevalent and whether there should be a balance of good and bad news. However, more depth and development of ideas would strengthen the task response.
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While your essay is mostly clear, some arguments could be presented more effectively. Ensure each point is fully developed and supported.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure is mostly effective, but some transitions could be smoother to enhance the flow of ideas.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph logically follows from the previous one, with clear topic sentences and concluding sentences.
introduction conclusion present
The introduction and conclusion effectively frame the essay, giving a clear sense of the topic and summarizing the main points well.
relevant specific examples
The use of relevant and specific examples, like CNN and New York Times, helps to substantiate your arguments and make them more compelling.
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