the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
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The two maps illustrate the
road
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access to a
city
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hospital between 2007 and 2010.
It is clear that
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many facilities improved around the
city
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hospital including a
bus
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station,
car
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parks, and roundabouts. In the past, Ring
Road
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was around the
city
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hospital and connected with Hospital
Road
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in front of the hospital. The staff and public
park
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were the south of the
city
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hospital, and the six
bus
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stops were in front of the
park
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, along Hospital
Road
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.
City
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Road
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paralleled the
city
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hospital and connected with Hospital
Road
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in 2007. In 2010, we can see that the six
bus
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stops combine into a
bus
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station located to the west-south of the hospital on Hospital
Road
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. Two roundabouts were constructed on the north and south of Hospital
Road
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and connected to the
City
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Road
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and Ring
Road
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. The previous
car
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park
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remained and was separated from the staff
car
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park
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and the public
car
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park
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which was in the east of the hospital on Ring
Road
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.
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, bus, car, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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