The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.
The diagram provides data about the sales of different kinds of fruit jams during the
period
from 2009 to 2014.
The strawberry jam
had the highest rate in the beginning and maintained its leading position throughout the 5-year period
. The grape jam
has the lowest rate of sales in 2009, but during the period
between 2009 and 2014
it witnessed a gradual increase, to 3rd place, being replaced by plum in 5th place in 2014.
The sales of strawberry Add a comma
,2014
jam
increased constantly from 3 to 7 in a five-year period
. The same trend experienced raspberry with some fluctuations, increasing with two units in the same period
of time. The rate of cherry increased slightly with a unit between 2009 and 2014, compared with plum, which experienced a negative trend of 2.5 to 0, being the least sold kind of jam
in 2014.
To sum up
, it is observed a huge qualitative change in the graph between 2009 and 2014. in
the beginning of the top three were the strawberry, raspberry and plume tastes, the third one being replaced in 2014 with grape Change the preposition
at
jam
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