Some people say that schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at home.

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that Universities are no longer
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because students are getting
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of
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information
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from
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and
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at home. in my
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, I strongly believe that academies are playing
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role in children's upbringing. Not only for academic
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but
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their communication, sports and social life. In
schools
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, students can meet their classmates and teachers where they can pass knowledge and
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each other.
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,
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are
also
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providing some supporting factors to grow them like sports
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,
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libraries
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,
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laboratory
rooms and study materials prepared by experts. Universities have
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teachers who have brilliancy in their particular subjects or a topic.
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schools
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there are
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different
teachers available for different subjects like Social Science, Science, Maths and
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further
more.
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,
on the other
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hand
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internet
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is definitely providing a lot of
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but it has its own limitations. There are
lot
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of sources available through technology
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irrelevant and misleading
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. if students will only learn through
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internet
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the internet
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then
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it will lead to misleading and
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. Their growth can not be in a 360 way and they will miss important elements.
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, academic, sports, and social life. In Conclusion,
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internet
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the internet
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is having a lot of
information
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but
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apply
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that can help
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the pupil
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pupil
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to upgrade them but to run its usage and practicality
schools
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are
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mandatory
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,
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just a myth that
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internet
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can replace
schools
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.
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