The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals I different parts of the world. Sumarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals I different parts of the world. 

Sumarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the International
visitors
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visitor's
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arrivals in the world, between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are significant differences among all the Countries, some of them, like South America and South-East Asia, never reached a tourists number above 50
million
and other Nations
such
as North America and Central Eastern Europe are represented by a crucial increase over the years. A more wide look, reveals that the highest rise
of
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tourists is represented by Central and Eastern Europe, in 1990 only 30
million
people
visited these parts of the country but in 1995
this
number doubled and in 2005 rise to almost 90
million
.
Instead
in other parts of the world like South-East Asia was a steady increase and in 2005 almost 50
million
people
.
It is clear that
there are two lines which are very similar, which represent one, Sub-Saharan Africa and the other South America. These countries started either with about 10
million
people
and follow a slight increase in the first one in 2005 accounting for 20
million
tourists, but the second one reached 5
million
fewer
people
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international tourist arrivals
  • insight
  • trend
  • significant
  • fluctuation
  • statistic
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady growth
  • decline
  • surge
  • data point
  • comparative
  • quantitative analysis
  • economic factor
  • political stability
  • tourism sector
  • global event
  • destination popularity
  • benchmark
  • year-on-year change
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