Nowadays, more and more people have access to the Internet. But constant availability of any information worsens people’s memory and critical thinking skills. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Living in the period of digitalisation and technologies, when all

information

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is available and the process of searching for some particular response is simple, there is often argued that unlimited access to knowledge is detrimental

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of individuals. In my opinion, it is indeed harmful to humans' intellectual development, in spite of its huge contribution to society's evolution. In the beginning, the possibility of looking for all kind of

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on the internet, make, subconsciously, memorizing some

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pointless for our brain. It is demonstrated that

people

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are used to forgetting all the

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that is

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easy to find online, making a difference not just in our way of thinking, but

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in brain structure, modifying forever the way

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perceive the world.

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, there is a term, the Google effect, which is used for describing the phenomenon of forgetting

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that is

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easy to google.

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of the amount and diversity of content found on websites,

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as online calculators or essay and note makers, a lot of young

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lose their motivation and determination of learning science and making some research by themself.

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, critical thinking and problem-solving skills are harmed and not developed enough for proper development.

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, the

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year I used to help students with middle school exam preparation, and

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I was explaining some elementary operations with exponents, a girl said something that shocked me. She said to me that she didn't learn fundamental formulas, as she found

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activity pointless, since all the calculus could be done on the internet.

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, the harmful effect of the internet,

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its numerous advantages, is undoubted. It affects not just the attitude to studies teenagers,

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of the huge amount of data available, the accessibility changes the human brain anatomically.

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, the variety of

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online has a lot of benefits for contemporary

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, if they maintain the balance and don't deny the importance of training memory and critical thinking, as it is paramount for individuals' mental health.

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