You live in a room in college which you share with another student. There are many problems with this arrangement and you find it difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain the problems and why is it difficult to work say how you would like the situation resolved
Dear Sir or Madam,
The purpose of writing
this
letter is to complain about the room and to request assistance in finding a better place for me.
I would like to start by pointing out that the room was shared with another student from Alrawabi School and I have lived with her for 3 months. She stays out for most part of the day Linking Words
while
I am studying for exams and it's difficult for me to concentrate on my studies.
Another point which could be added is that my roommate plays loud music at night, playing different hunting games with loud sounds at night and that interrupts my sleep. I can not tolerate with her It is almost impossible to stay with her.
I was wondering if you could be able to transfer me or my flatmate to another room. I would prefer a mate who is quieter and considerate.
I hope you will take immediate action to solve the issue and look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Ayesha MadonLinking Words
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