Many people believe that cycling is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport.However, it is still unpopular in many countries. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of the bicycle among wider population?

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Good health is significant for the social, mental and physical development of a person. A lot of folks think that
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way of transport is cycling, yet it's still
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unwanted in many nations. I will mention the causes and how to encourage the use of
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with, First of all, everyone wants comfort in their lives which cannot be given by a cycle.
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cars are being made and folks become lethargic.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable transport
  • infrastructure
  • dedicated bike lanes
  • road safety
  • urban planning
  • cultural perceptions
  • weather conditions
  • topography
  • status symbol
  • awareness campaigns
  • government incentives
  • policy measures
  • transportation alternatives
  • commuting methods
  • environmentally friendly
  • health benefits
  • recreational activity
  • commute
  • urban transportation
  • public awareness
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