some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some infomation is too important or too valueable to be shared freely.
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that
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people
that sharing as a great deal of info as possible is beneficial in scientific research, work life
and academic area whereas
the rest advocate not to share
information
as they are excessively significant and precious according to
them.
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Information
is precious in the world. All people
spend time and money for
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on
information
all life
. According to
one reason, this
knowledge acquired throughout life
should share
other
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with other
people
and the knowledge increase as we share
about such
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and academic
For example
, companies like Tesla and Apple, make useful devices and make easier of
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people
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. and also
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On the other hand
, the rest advocate should not think to share
info with humanity. Some information
is too valuable and can’t share
because some people
don’t know the purpose and the importance of sharing information
. For illustrate, terrorists can harm people
by bomb-making videos on the internet. In addition
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share
this
valuable information
for free.
In conclusion, information
and data have become the most valuable mean in day-to-day life
in the recent present. It is beneficial to share
as much information
as possible in some fields while
every
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