The diagram below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.

The assigned map charts illustrate the information about the site of a

school

in 2004 and the plan for changes to the

school

site in 2024.

Overall

, it is lucid that, the site of

this

school

has vast change in the given period. At a fleeting glance, it is crystal clear that

,

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in

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the north-east side of the

school

had sports field in 2004.

while

in 2024, it would

be convert

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into the

school

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School

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Building 3 and

also

develop parking space 2 and a sports field.

Moreover

,

in

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on

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the northwest side, it was

school

building 1, car parking and

main

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entrence

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entrance

in the 21st century .

Whereas

, in the future , it would remain the same . In the

past

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merely 600 students had studied in

this

school

.

Further

scrutinizing the map. in the middle east-wast side, it was

path

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and

school

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a school

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building 2. whilst, it would remain stable, in the 21st century and they

also

built a road. After that, in the east-south, the 21st century, it had a huge forest.

while

, in the future, it would not change . It was interesting to note that the number of students would increase

with

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1000 in the future 2024.