The diagram which illustrates processes of the life cycle of a species of large fish named the salmon.

The diagram which illustrates  processes of the life cycle of a species of large fish named the salmon.
The assigned natural
process
illustrates the information about the processes of the life cycle of a large
fish
which name is the
salmon
.
Overall
, it is a natural
process
,
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and has several stages. The
process
of large
fish
salmon
starts from the development
from
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eggs
to mature
fish
. At a fleeting glance. it is crystal clear that in the first
stage
, the life cycle of
salmon
fish
lay
eggs
inside the reeds and
eggs
are very small like
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. It is found
the
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upper river, which is moved slowly and they stay their around 5 to 6 months . In the second
stage
, the fry
found
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in the lower river, which is flowing very fast, they live for 4 years and the size of the fry is approximately 3 to 8 cm.
Further
scrutinizing the
process
, in the third
stage
they become smolt and their size is about 12 to 15 cm. After that, the smolt goes to the open sea . In the following
stage
, these smolts later become adult
salmon
within 5 years and their size is increased
nearly
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70 to 76 cm.
Finally
, the
fish
again lay
eggs
and
this
process
starts from the beginning .
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