Writing a letter to manager for computer system problem

Dear Sir I am writing

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letter regarding computer system difficulties which occurs in

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week.

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, It causes delays in our daily office activities.

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, Our associates complain that when they tried to log in on a computer, the screen stuck in the same position for an hour and as a

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result they faced issues before starting work and customers felt frustrated

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long waiting periods.

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, I face a few glitches in the system

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as when I tried to refund an item

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it shows that I already did it.

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, customers complained that they did not receive an email about their money which result in an argument .

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, I have difficulties with a sound system like a voice is low and when customers call us, I didn't hear the voice properly and as a ,result our pre-subs become lower. I hope you solve my problem as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Raman

ramanar7355Thu Mar 09 2023

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

159 words

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Writing a letter to manager for computer system problem

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter

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