Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. “Fatherhood ought to emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.” To what extend do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that parenthood is a cumbersome task. In today's ,world both fathers and 
mothers
 find less Use synonyms
time
 to spend with their Use synonyms
children
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due to
 their busy work and increasing responsibilities. Whether the father or the mother has a greater role has always been a debated topic. In my opinion, the upbringing of  Linking Words
children
 is a joint effort and both parents have equal responsibility. 
The main reason why some people believe Use synonyms
mothers
 are more accountable for bringing up their Use synonyms
children
 is that  kids spend a lot more Use synonyms
time
 with their Use synonyms
mothers
 than they spent with their fathers right from the Use synonyms
time
 a baby is born. During the initial years of the babies, the babies are dependent more on their Use synonyms
mothers
 for milk and basic needs than their fathers . Use synonyms
Due to
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this
 dependency, Linking Words
mothers
 have a greater influence during the first few years of the kid's life . Use synonyms
For instance
, kids learn a lot from Linking Words
mothers
 during Use synonyms
this
 stage Linking Words
such
 as self-control, empathy, love and caring etc which are vital qualities that shape the character of the child.
Another reason people think dads have a lesser role is Linking Words
due to
 the fact that in the majority of families , the dads are full-Linking Words
time
 workers and the only breadwinner of the house. Use synonyms
This
 makes them busy with  work and they have less Linking Words
time
 to spend with their family. Use synonyms
For instance
, even though the father is covering all the expenses of the house including education and other expenses during the fostering of the Linking Words
children
, they rarely get quality Use synonyms
time
 for social interaction with their Use synonyms
children
 which is very much essential during their growing age. 
To summarize, bringing up heir is a challenging job and both father and mother have equal responsibilities to share. Working parents need to find Use synonyms
time
 to make sure that their kids are fostered with the right attitudes and skills which will shape the character of the child and make them a better individual when they grow up. These Use synonyms
children
 could be our future scientists or doctors. Use synonyms
Hence
 it is each one of our responsibility that our Linking Words
children
 are brought upright.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
 - secondly
 - thirdly
 - in additional
 - moreover
 - also
 - for example
 - for instance
 - therefore
 - however
 - although
 - even though
 - despite