Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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positive changes, we have been witnessing recently in all sections of our life, especially

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, humans live longer which enforces us to face new challenges like exploding the population and taking care of long in tooth

people

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. Many solutions have been suggested to deal with

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problem that keeps things under control. First and foremost, by virtue of cutting-edge innovations many diseases have been eradicated and a lot of illness are disappeared

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vacations which causes less death and

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increases the inhabitance.

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, living longer means more old

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to take care of.

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new trouble adds a humanitarian burden to cope with. There are several ways to deal with

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trouble that can lead us to a satisfactory settlement and approximately ideal solvent. Let’s start with the most relatively important,

health

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issue. The grey-haired class needs a special kind of

health

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insurance to secure them against the lack of remedy they require during the ageing stage. The existence of various and thorough

health

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programs which are available for all elderlies alleviates the problem.

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, the Presence of wheelchairs and escalators in public places eases elders’ movements during transportation.

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, we can use technology in solving

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problem, like making robot assistants to help older

people

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in case they need extra assistance.

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, elderly with special needs at care centres can get benefits

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auto assistance in some cases.

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, the ageing stage is a period of time we will all go throw if we are lucky enough, so finding a solution to deal with elderly

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is not just a human responsibility, but it is

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a payment in advance we will absolutely reap its benefits one day.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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290 words

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Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Your opinion

Writing Task 1: The percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000

Many people believe that mobile phones cause more harms than the benefits and that’s why mobile phones should be restricted? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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