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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Write at least 250 words)

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Communication
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 is an essential factor in our social lives, and now with the growth of technologies, new methods of interaction have gone viral
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 as, texting, memes, reactions, and
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 messages. Despite these ways of
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, I still agree with the fact that there is no better way of interacting
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 more effective than verbal interactions. First of all, the primary reason that supports that spoken methods are better than writing ones is the emotions delivered through our voices.
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, in written forms of socializing, there is a clear absence of feelings and sentimental
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 compared to verbal
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.
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, when someone is happy or sad, one can realize it from the speaker's tone, pitch, and facial expressions. Meanwhile, written forms tend to be blunt, and directive, and rarely show the sender's feelings.
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, there are many people
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 it hard to express their ideas via messages, and sometimes they can not find the proper way of wording that can convey their intended thoughts.
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, they prefer spoken language where they can
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 their thoughts freely without the restricted style of written texts. Evidently, studies have shown that only 2 out of 10 people like to communicate via texting, and the majority of society supports talking through spoken language.
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, as interaction is greatly important, many means of
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 have been available including, calls, texts, emails,
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 messages and others. In spite of having all these ways, I believe that there is no method that can replace the efficiency and power of verbal language.
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