In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods . This is having a negative effects on both families and societies . To what extent do you agree or disagree

The advent of fast

foods

are

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creating so many problems in societies

as well as

in families. Some nations are even replacing their cultural

food

products

by

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foreign

food

items

. I completely disagree with

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cause

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several issues in communities and families.

Firstly

,

by

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consuming

great

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amount of fast

food

items

are

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causing many health problems like obesity , heart attacks and deaths related to

food

posinous

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poisonous

in societies , and

as a result

, it is affecting the population rates in countries .

For example

, there are so many survey reports proving that fast

foods

are

real

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threat to society ; which can even increase the death ratios in nations.

Moreover

, most fast

foods

are really expensive and individuals even need to purchase

food

by

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from

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restaurant

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the restaurant

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, which

take

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a great amount of time to

recieve

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receive

it.

For instance

, we can see

that

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crowds in front of KFC stores ,where people need to wait for more than 30 mins to buy

a

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food items

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food

items

.

In addition

, people are even forgetting their cooking skills by ordering fast

foods

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food

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hotels ;

that

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are

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not even spending time

to cook

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cooking

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food

, which can be a good remedy for stress issues.

Moreover

,

public

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are

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also

forgetting their own roots ; where they spend time

together with

their family members to cook a dish .

futhermore

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Furthermore

, communities

are even forgotten

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have even forgotten

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the benefits of traditional

food

items

, where some

food

products contained medical recipes which are beneficial to

body

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the body

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.

For example

, masala tea ,

which

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is a traditional drink in India that contains medical herbs like mint and other spices.

To conclude

,

it is clear that

fast

foods

from overseas are causing serious problems in societies and families like health issues and

forgeting

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forgetting

valuable traditional

food

items

. So changes like those should be restricted.