Write a letter to the transport officer about a problem with transport system in your area. In your letter - Describe the situation you are facing - Why you consider it a problem - What changes you would like to recommend

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to

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issue in the city bus

transportaion

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transportation

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apply

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and would like to provide some suggestions to resolve it. My name is Pramod, and I am living on Front St. in Toronto. I would like to bring your attention to the fact that there has been a delay by the city buses to arrive at the station. I am a frequent user of the public

trasport

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transport

to travel

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work place

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every day. For the past few days,

due to

delay

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delays

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in buses, I

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have been

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facing

problem

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problems

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to reach at

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reaching

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work place

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workplace

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on time.

This

issue

is not only face

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by me, but

also

experienced by other travellers.

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, many people

recevied

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received

receive

a notice from their working place to

arrrive

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arrive

on time.

As a result

this

problem needs to be solved. I would like to suggest

to conduct

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a through

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through

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investigation to find out the root cause of

delay

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the delay

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in public transport by appointing

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investigation officer. Thank you for your time, and I hope that

this

matter will be taken into consideration promptly. Yours faithfully, Pramod.

Submitted by pramodv997 on Tue Nov 05 2024

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grammar

Check for minor spelling and grammatical errors to improve accuracy, like 'transportaion' and 'trasport'.

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Provide more specific suggestions for how the arrival time of buses could be improved.

coherence cohesion

The letter is well-structured with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

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Clear and concise description of the problem and its impact.

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Polite and formal tone suitable for addressing a transport officer.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

186 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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