In
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last
decade, common health issues have increased in many countries. It is Correct article usage
the last
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a complaint
the complaint
complaint
by many parents that their children influence Correct your spelling
compliant
from
obesity Change preposition
by
due to
bad eating Linking Words
habits
, lack of outdoor Use synonyms
activities
and Use synonyms
promoting
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promotion
junk
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of junk
food
in Use synonyms
Add an article
the advertisement
an advertisement
advertisement
. Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
As per
my point of view, Change preposition
In
this
problem can be solved by taking some important measures.
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due to
an array of reasons. Linking Words
firstly
, young ones Linking Words
having
improper eating Wrong verb form
have
habits
, Use synonyms
secondly
, addiction Linking Words
of
indoor Change preposition
to
activities
and Use synonyms
lastly
mass promotion of fast Linking Words
food
by advertising. To illustrate, kids prefer to have unhealthy Use synonyms
food
Use synonyms
such
as pizza, Linking Words
burger
and soft drinks which contain fat Fix the agreement mistake
burgers
minerals
and lack Correct word choice
and minerals
of
protein and vitamins, Change preposition
apply
this
has caused Linking Words
due to
attractive Linking Words
advertisement
in surrounding locations. Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
Moreover
, Linking Words
they
can be seen that kids like to do Correct pronoun usage
it
activities
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such
as Linking Words
play
video games, Replace the word
playing
watching
TV and Wrong verb form
watch
use
Wrong verb form
using
mobile
at home, Correct pronoun usage
their mobile
in
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as
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a result
result
they spend major time in the house. Add a comma
,result
Thus
, many children have some Linking Words
disease
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diseases
such
as depression, Linking Words
heart
disease which are responsible for Correct word choice
and heart
overweight
.
to solve Add a missing verb
being overweight
this
, Linking Words
school
should change their Add an article
the school
a school
food
system. Use synonyms
For instance
, they should allow only healthy Linking Words
food
in Use synonyms
lunch
Add an article
a lunch
the lunch
box
, Fix the agreement mistake
boxes
such
as fruit, salad and sprouted beans from which children get enough energy and minerals. Linking Words
furthermore
, parents should encourage their kids for playing outdoor games, for Linking Words
that
government Correct determiner usage
the
have
already provided amenities in public parks. Not only that but Correct subject-verb agreement
has
also
, Linking Words
it
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
surveyed
on Japanese Replace the word
survey
school
by the World Health Organization Fix the agreement mistake
schools
and
revealed that Correct word choice
apply
student
had good healthy Fix the agreement mistake
students
life style
and immune Correct your spelling
lifestyle
system
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systems
due to
these schooling Linking Words
enforced
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enforcing
to
eat only healthy Correct pronoun usage
them to
food
at their places.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, Outdoor Linking Words
activities
and good eating Use synonyms
habits
play Use synonyms
paramount
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a paramount
the paramount
role
to reduce overweight. Taking support of above argument schools and parents should give proper knowledge of Fix the agreement mistake
roles
food
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habits
.Use synonyms