In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation.

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There is no doubt that these days it is essential to be a

house

landlord

instead

of letting one

due to

the beneficial value which will significantly soar over decades and I believe that having a home is not necessary ,especially for foreign

people

Initially

, it is with considering that the economic advantages of owning a

house

are numerous. To illustrate

this

point, citizens tend to buy houses even if in the countryside so they can rent them for tourists on holidays as a resort and get a valuable benefit.

In addition

, some specific traditions tend to have their own houses and make them live for long-term for their generating family as an heirloom.

Furthermore

due to

the dramatic rise in rental tenancy ,prices

people

believe that having their own

house

is much better than having a high-priced small flat. What is more, it is evident that owning a

house

is not a potential thing for

people

especially who settle down in the country for the

short-term

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short term

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For example

, scholarship students -who come to study for no more than 7 years- do not need to own a large

house

as they will need accommodation for short time.

Thus

, having a home will not be essential for them.

In addition

, researchers have indicated that only

people

who work in exchanging houses - buying and selling- will benefit from owning a

house

as their job is dependent on an economical goals and not for personal living.

To conclude

, having a

house

could be essential for some specific

people

However

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,However

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owning one is unnecessary for most of the nation.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Nowsadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. This has negative effects on themselves and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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