Write a letter to a friend expressing your interest to seek employment in a different country. Your letter should include: – Why you want to work in a different country – What type of work you will be looking for – Questions you have about working in a different country that your friend may be able to answer

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Dear Sumon, I hope you are in sound health and doing well. I am writing

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letter to inform you about my interest in seeking a suitable

job

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in a developed country like

Canada

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, where you have been living since 2022. As you know, I have obtained an MBA major in Human Resource Management from Independent University

Banagladesh

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Bangladesh

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, I have been working for a multinational manufacturing company as a human resources manager since 2018. I know that

Canada

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is a developed country, and educated and skilled people are always welcomed in

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developed country.

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, I strongly believe that my current

job

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experience and educational qualifications are good enough to find a good

job

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in a related sector. Basically,

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this

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reason, I am interested in immigrating to

Canada

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with a work permit. As you have been there for a long time, I have one question to ask you regarding the working rules and regulations in

Canada

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. Is a human resources manager

job

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available in

Canada

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considering the current economic crisis all over the world? I am looking forward to your kind reply and advice. Warm wishes, Faisal

Submitted by faisalmahamood on Thu Nov 16 2023

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logical structure

Ensure that your letter follows a clear and logical structure. Consider ordering your ideas to improve flow and understanding.

greeting and closing

Your greeting and closing are appropriate, but making them more personalized and less formal might enhance the overall friendliness of the letter.

single idea per paragraph

You've maintained a single idea per paragraph, which is good. However, you could elaborate more on your experiences or expectations to create fuller paragraphs.

complete response

You have directly addressed all three points required by the task. Well done. To enhance your response, consider giving a bit more detail on each point.

suitable writing tone

The tone of your letter is suitably semi-formal, which is appropriate for a letter to a friend. Keep this consistent throughout your writing.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

189 words

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