The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. 

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures illustrate information about the
reasons
why people choose to cycle or drive to
work
. Units are measured by
percentage
. As can be seen from the pie charts, health and fitness and
also
less pollution are responsible for the main factors of people who choose cycling to
work
.
Moreover
, the most significant
percentage
of driving to
work
is allocated to comfort.
In particular
, almost the same
percentage
of people prefer cycling or driving because of their speed. The most significant proportion of
reasons
for driving to
work
, 40%, is used for comfort. Followed by distance to
work
which accounts for 18% less.
Additionally
, the lowest
percentage
of
reasons
belongs to safer than cycling which is 11%.
On the other hand
, health and fitness and
also
less pollution are responsible for the largest number of
reasons
for cycling to
work
at 30%. The other reason
that is
no parking problems allocated 15% which is twice less than less pollution and health and fitness. The figure for faster than driving is 12% and there is no significant difference between the figure for driving to
work
which is 11%.
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