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Nowadays, there are more and more people suffering from health problems. Why people choose unhealthy lifestyle? How could we resolve this problem?

#people #health #lifestyle
Health problems,
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which are increasing rapidly,
the
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 most threatening topic the world faces today. In
this
 21st
century
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this
 is a major argument public suffering from fitness diseases and that's increasing more and more day by day
also
 they tending unhealthy lifestyle but first of
all
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 we need to understand what is leading to
such
 an argument there some several steps which can be taken to tackle
this
 problem which I will examine in
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Firstly
, the human body requires a balanced diet. An unhealthy diet can cause various health problems.
On the contrary
, modern lifestyles are increasingly stressful and
population
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work
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 long hours with strict deadlines.
community
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 have to earn more money they don't have time for cooking
also
 in their workplace cafeteria and restaurants are easily available so they prefer those junk food.
However
, those pre-prepared meals are tasty but
its
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not hygienic and have low calories.
Furthermore
, urban cities have pollution
its
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increasing strength problems and affecting
human
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 body like eyes, skin diseases, hair fall and
also
 sugar levels, diabetes, blood pressure and cancer. In that case, we can resolve
this
 point by taking
such
 a decision. Good healthcare should be available to everyone for free by the government using money from taxes. Government can raise people's awareness of healthy eating.
In addition
, life in urban cities can be extremely stressful. Global warming will have a significant impact on our planet. Governments could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories.
Thus
,
to conclude
 the topic, people
start
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 avoid fast food and follow
a
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healthy
diets
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diet
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likewise
, regular exercise is essential in maintaining a healthy body and stopping choosing unhealthy meals and lifestyles.
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