In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case. Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
People
in some countries consider owning a home
to be more important than renting a
one. Correct article usage
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This
essay will discuss the main reasons for these preferences and detailed
the positive effect.
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of
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for
home
are high
cost Correct article usage
the high
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what
they have to pay monthly and not having a settlement Correct word choice
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their
life. Most Change preposition
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of
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the
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people
invest their money in housing loan
to get a Fix the agreement mistake
loans
home
of their own. It is a large investment for them, otherwise
, people
have to pay rent in
their whole lifetime. Change preposition
for
Also
, people
can save their
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time
on
searching Change preposition
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for the
the
rental Correct article usage
a
home
because the rental home
can buy for the
constant Correct article usage
a
time
period. Furthermore
, people
have to pay advance
for their rental Change preposition
in advance
home
, and they cannot move without completing the contract time
period. People
fail to change their home
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homes
for
their preference in Change preposition
to
contract
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the contract
a contract
time
period. However
, some countries have more benefits, if people
own a home
for them. As an example, Sri
Lanka, most Change preposition
in Sri
of
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the
school is considered Correct article usage
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a
permanent address Correct article usage
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to
getting a school.
Comparatively, owning a Change preposition
for
home
has more advantages such
as stability of life after getting older as well as
reduction
of expenses. Correct article usage
a reduction
However
, after becoming above 60 ages, who
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those who
included
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are included
to
the workforce cannot afford rental expenses. Change preposition
in
Finally
, it helps to keep the
mental health rather than searching and moving to Correct article usage
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the
rental Correct article usage
a
home
in
a whole lifetime.
Change preposition
for
To sum up
, people
get social and lifetime savings by having a home
for them instead
of wasting their money and time
for
expenditures.Change preposition
on
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