It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to childen?

One of the most controversial issues around the world is

children

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to them.Meanwhile,some people believe

punishment

is a good way to teach them

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between right and wrong.I completely disagree with physical

punishment

,and I think, it is better to punish

children

with non-violence

punishment

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some relevant examples. It is well-established fact that

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corporal

punishment

,not only is not an effective way to control

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childrens

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children

but

also

it

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damages

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childrens

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children's

self-esteem.

In addition

, some physical punishments

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can damage them for long

times

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time

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.

For example

,some parents or teachers harm

children

with

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a wooden

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stick

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,and the wound may remain for weeks on their arms or their legs.Other

further

kinds of

punishment

that has a negative impact on them are

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with bad words or unkind

behaviour

with them .All

this

behaviour

can have

long-term

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a long-term

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effect

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effects

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on

childrens

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children's

soul

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and

brain

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. There are many alternative

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to punish

children

in non-violent ways.The reason is that

children

are open-minded and they are ready to learn many things in appropriate ways.

Children

firstly

,can learn from their

parent

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during their childhood and

throughout

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communication with their

parent

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.

Children

imitate their

parents

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parent's

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behaviour

and can learn right and wrong easily.

For example

,when

children

do something wrong

parent

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can easily

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them

from

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their weekly

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or

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their favourite cartoons

instead

of physical

punishment

.Teachers in schools

also

can teach them

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an effective ways

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an effective way

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.

For instance

,when

children

hurts

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their friends they should be forced to apologise

their

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friends.

To sum up

,parents and teachers have enormous duties toward

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and their

behaviour

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influence

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an influence

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on

children

mentally,physically and socially.With the cooperation of

both

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we can gain the desired result.