It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to childen?
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One of the most controversial issues around the world is
children
and everything that related
to them.Meanwhile,some people believe Add a missing verb
is related
punishment
is a good way to teach them distinguish
between right and wrong.I completely disagree with physical Add the particle
to distinguish
punishment
,and I think, it is better to punish children
with non-violence punishment
.In this
essay,I will discuss with
some relevant examples.
It is well-established fact thatChange preposition
apply
,
corporal Remove the comma
apply
punishment
,not only is not an effective way to control of
Change preposition
apply
childrens
but Correct your spelling
children
also
it damage
Correct subject-verb agreement
damages
childrens
self-esteem.Correct your spelling
children's
In addition
, some physical punishments,
can damage them for long Remove the comma
apply
times
.Fix the agreement mistake
time
For example
,some parents or teachers harm children
with wooden
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a wooden
stick
,and the wound may remain for weeks on their arms or their legs.Other Fix the agreement mistake
sticks
further
kinds of punishment
that has a negative impact on them are speak
with bad words or unkind Wrong verb form
speaking
behaviour
with them .All this
behaviour
can have long-term
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a long-term
effect
on Fix the agreement mistake
effects
childrens
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children's
soul
and Fix the agreement mistake
souls
brain
.
There are many alternative Fix the agreement mistake
brains
way
to punish Change to a plural noun
ways
children
in non-violent ways.The reason is that children
are open-minded and they are ready to learn many things in appropriate ways.Children
firstly
,can learn from their parent
during their childhood and Fix the agreement mistake
parents
throughout
communication with their Change preposition
through
parent
.Fix the agreement mistake
parents
Children
imitate their parents
Change to a genitive case
parent's
parents'
behaviour
and can learn right and wrong easily.For example
,when children
do something wrong parent
can easily Fix the agreement mistake
parents
deprived
them Change the verb form
deprive
from
their weekly Change the preposition
of
financial
or Replace the word
finances
seeing
their favourite cartoons Wrong verb form
see
instead
of physical punishment
.Teachers in schools also
can teach them with
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in
an effective ways
.Correct the article-noun agreement
an effective way
effective ways
For instance
,when children
hurts
their friends they should be forced to apologise Change the verb form
hurt
their
friends.
Change preposition
to their
To sum up
,parents and teachers have enormous duties toward childrens
and their Correct your spelling
children
behaviour
have
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has
influence
on Add an article
an influence
children
mentally,physically and socially.With the cooperation of both
we can gain the desired result.Add a comma
,both
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