It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

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The world is always shifting, and so do
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, some
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choose travelling as a
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to open their minds
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and see how the world has changed day by day. From my point of view, I partly agree with
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the advantages of it and travel is not only a
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to help
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broaden their knowledge. Travelling can be seen as an effective
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to be open-minded
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some reasons. First of all, travelling will help
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to know more about a country, by experiencing their culture and custom.
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, when foreign visitors come to Vietnam, they have a chance to understand more about the behaviour, and lifestyle of most Vietnamese through daily activities.
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, going to another place is one of the best ways to meet new friends and witness different points of view on an issue. Different
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from different countries will have their own thought, and views about a situation.
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,
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can easily put themself in others' shoes, and develop empathy. On top of that, there are some effective ways to broaden the mind, not only by travelling. Changing opinions and seeing others' reactions can be learned by experiencing real-life situations.
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, a discussion definitely shows us the thinking of our friends on the same issue.
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that,
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realize how their minds change
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thinking about that situation, in
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or that
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and why they have those views. Opening the mind can
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get from reading.
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,
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can witness the author's view or figure out the solution that they found when reading a self-help book. In conclusion, it can be claimed that not only travelling but
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other effective ways can help
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be open-minded.
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, I do agree with
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statement partly
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the above reasons.
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