Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, we are surrounded by technological tools of each type, size and dimension.

While

we are using them, they track everything we are doing and they have the access to personal data

such

as telephone numbers, photos and even products that we bought. Very often, some

people

do not have

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about these devices, so they do not know that

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is happening. In

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I will discuss why I think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and I will argue about some of them. Without the

use

of

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as Google Maps or

Waze

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we would not have one of the most significant advantages of nowadays, we

use

them every day to go to work or new restaurants or

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where we are never been. It is true that

this

kind of app

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our location and

use

to track where we are, but some

people

cannot live

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. On the Internet we can find all we need

such

as a pie recipe, free books or music and useful materials for university,

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through our online research, companies can find out our preferences and

this

is why sometimes we found products that we would like to have on the recommended part. Unfortunately

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out what we want means

that is

probably that we will spend more money on those items, and

this

is one of the scariest disadvantages because in some

people

this

can provoke the compulsory shopping syndrome. Another disadvantage is that very often our devices have one photo

cameras

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, so it is possible that some websites take photos of us during our research. In my

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there are several methods to avoid a wide list of disadvantages,

for

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you can put a sticker on your webcam so they cannot take videos

of

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pictures of you and try to not share your position when it is possible.

People

cannot live without all the advantages that technologies offer us so but is it important to be aware of the situation to avoid bad

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.

To conclude

, in

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essay I discussed some useful things that we do with technology every day but I

also

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what we have to be aware

for

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our security.