You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You haven't seen each other for a long time and was happy to meet him/her. Now write a letter to this friend. In your letter: - say how you felt about the visit - refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her - invite your friend to visit you

Dear Riddhi, I hope

this

letter finds you well. It was great to stay with you during my trip to Ahmedabad. It was much helpful and I learnt a lot from you.

Additionally

, we had a lot of fun together at that time and I felt very happy for those moments we spent together.

Moreover

, I still remember the fun we had when we went boating in Kankaria lake.

However

, It was scary for me when I entered the boat, but your pieces of advice and guidance helped me a lot to enjoy the ride and now I am a pro at riding the boat. I must say thank you for all your efforts and it would have been bizarre if you were not there. I request you come to Gandhinagar next summer vacation. We will have so much fun and will go fishing nearby lake Sant Sarovar. I will wait to hear from you soon. Yours lovingly, Kishan

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