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One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
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 contemporary world, all nations from different parts of the world increasingly have a problem feeding large populations. There are some people who argue that genetically modified is a good solution to overcome
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 issue. In
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 essay, I strongly agree with
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 viewpoint.
To begin
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 with, a nation will have numerous benefits if they go for genetically modified
food
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. It can
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 the demand of most groups as it grows fast and in great quantity. To illustrate, genetically modified
crops
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 grow faster than any other
crops
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, and it takes minimum time to grow as per the scientific data.
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, as compared to any other
crops
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, genetically modified
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crops
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 withstand a natural disaster,
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 as drought, as it needs minimum water to grow.
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, genetically modified
foods
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 have more benefits than any other
foods
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.
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,
this
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food
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 has some drawbacks
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 organic
food
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. First and foremost, cuisine that grows naturally has more nutrition than genetic
foods
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. To cite an example, a survey by the team of WHO has concluded by the sample reports of both
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. Genetically modified plants grow with the help of fertilizer and pesticides; they lack in nutrition that a diet should have,
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 organic
food
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 is full of vitamins and other minerals that are important for the human body.
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, organic
food
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 is important in terms of getting good nutritional value.
To conclude
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,
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 a naturally growing diet has more health value,
but
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it can not
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 the demand of a large population. In my opinion, focusing on planting more genetically modified
food
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 is beneficial to solve the problem of foodstuffs among the masses.

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