Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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about

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games

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,certain human beings think that

sports

amenities are the best choice to develop their fitness and

health

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,other counterpart civilians think that it would create a detrimental effect on

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will discuss both views and in the forthcoming

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my opinion. To commence with,there

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myriad

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of positive things

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playing

games

,it would boost their mental and physical

health

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According to

the recent research of Oxford University on public

health

issues.They identified that

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of civilians are

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towards badminton and volleyball

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established

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mandatory rules regarding

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their

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must and should play in any one game.

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not only

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for

health

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also

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deteriorates

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anxiety and mental pressure at work.

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would create a plethora of pros for society and

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creates

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healthy environment for

community

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the community

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,there

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also

drawbacks with some

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of

sports

,which is about Football and Rugby,these two

activies

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activities

plays

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a serious causes

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on aged people.Sometimes, it would lead to

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heart strokes and physical injuries.

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,without physical fitness

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it is very difficult to play

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of

games

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are becoming

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popularity

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of gym and yoga

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compared

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with

sports

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few people are interested

about

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gym

instead

of

games

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To sum up

,

sports

have been growing

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in popularity

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across the globe.

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assists

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public

health

and fitness.Mainly ,badminton plays a significant role in individual

heatlh

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health

and it enhances

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immunity power and strength.