Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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day and age, it is widely recognized that

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of residents are

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about

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games

.

However

, certain human beings think that

sports

amenities are the best choice to develop their fitness and

health

.

Whereas

, other counterpart civilians think that it would create a detrimental effect on

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. In

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essay, I will discuss both views and in the forthcoming essays provide my opinion. To commence with, there

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myriad

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of positive things

with

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playing

games

, it would boost their mental and physical

health

.

According to

the recent research of Oxford University on public

health

issues,

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identified that

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of civilians are

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towards badminton and volleyball

games

. To cite an example, Brazil has established a mandatory rule regarding

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its

health

and in that

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locals must play in any one game. That not only benefits

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health

but

also

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deteriorates

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anxiety and mental pressure at work. That would create a plethora of pros for society and it creates

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healthy environment for

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. In spite of having

also

drawbacks with some

kind

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of

sports

such

as Football and Rugby, these two activities play serious causes on aged people. Sometimes, it would lead to heart stroke and physical injuries.

Furthermore

, without physical fitness, it is very difficult to play these kinds of

games

. Even though

gym

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and yoga are becoming

popularity

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compare

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with

sports

, so few people are interested in going to

gym

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the gym

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instead

of playing

games

.

To sum up

,

sports

have been growing

popularity

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in popularity

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across the globe.

Moreover

, it assists public

health

and fitness. Mainly, badminton plays a significant role in individual

health

and it enhances

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immunity power and strength.