The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

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that

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apply

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the improvement of the village of

Ray

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Ray's

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mouth from 1995 to the present moment.

Overall

,the farmland and forest park have been demolished,where they built golf and tennis court.

However

,a car park has been built in the

south-east

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southeast

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corner of the map. At the first glance,in 1995 the farmland and forest estate were situated on the

south-east

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southeast

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side,where golf and tennis have

constructed

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been constructed

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in the present.

Moreover

,the fishing port and fish market were located in the southern part,which is disappeared in the current era,where apartments are erected and the fish market has been removed.The cafe and hotel have remained same in the both years,but a new car parking area has been constructed next to the hotel.

Secondly

,The housing increased from 12 in 1995 to 16 at present moment.Golf occupied the major portion in the

north-east

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northeast

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corner of the chart.Sea is located

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the south side,but the fishing port has been totally removed in the current day.In the present age,the road has extended from

centre

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the centre

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to the western side.

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Urban development
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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

In some countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people believe that governments have the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than Secondary school. Do the advantage of this outweight the disadvantages?

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