Currently, most students are studying only mathematics and the world language, English. What do you think its advantages more than its disadvantages?

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In some countries, many

students

learn math and

English

because some people believe the course of these sciences plays a vital role in human life, despite the fact that there are other

subjects

. In general, people think that there are advantages and disadvantages to studying only these disciplines. In

this

essay, I will discuss both the positive sides and negative sides of

this

in two paragraphs. First and foremost, studying abroad, especially in the United States, is becoming everyone's dream at present because there are a lot of universities that stand in the top 10 places there.

Students

who graduated from these universities are offered jobs by very large companies for high salaries.

Therefore

, someone who wants to study at an American university must know

English

because of the

English

-speaking population.

In addition

this

, there are many well-paid jobs who good at

mathematics

in there. Unfortunately, some think that only studying these

subjects

at all can make it difficult for a person to find his place in the future. Some people say that

students

study only these

subjects

in order to find their place in the future, which is their biggest mistake. The reason why some think like

that is

now many

students

could not achieve their aim,

that is

students

are learning only

mathematics

and

English

, but in the end, they are changing their field to other sciences,

for example

, chemistry and biology and so on. I think

this

is the largest downside of

this

On the other hand

, it

also

has many advantages

although

studying these

subjects

has got drawbacks.

For instance

, as mentioned above,

mathematics

and the

English

language create many priorities for the human future. If a student studies other

subjects

while

learning math and

English

, they may delay the time to reach their goal. We consider

this

to be one of the most beneficial aspects of time management. Another advantage is opportunities to participate in many competitions and get places,

that is

, currently, many competitions are held mainly in

mathematics

and

English

To sum up

, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and based on my life experience, I have no bad opinion of those who want to study only

mathematics

and

English

Submitted by abrorjon_1995 on Mon Mar 13 2023

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Currently, most students are studying only mathematics and the world language, English. What do you think its advantages more than its disadvantages?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

You are invited to a party, however, because of some reasons you didn’t attend. Write a letter to the friend who invites you: (1) explain the reason why you didn’t go; (2) express your apology; (3) ask about some details in the party.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the country side is decreasing.

Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development s other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Children all over the world should learn to speak a single, universal language fluently in addition to their native language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?