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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone who knew you when you were at school. Write a letter to one of your old teachers asking for a reference. In your letter: say what job you have applied for explain why you want this job suggest what information the teacher should include

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Dear Pro. Darrin, Hope
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 finds you in radiant health. I am writing
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letter
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 to kindly request
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apply
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a
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 of reference, which is required for my job application. As you may know, I will graduate next month, and I would like to get
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 in business as soon as possible. Recently, I have been offered a fabulous position as a tour leader in a well-known international company. I believe
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 position ties in with my future career plans. If I get hired, I will be responsible for both local and
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 tours.
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, not only can I work in a prestigious company but
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 I can travel around the world. Depending on the requirements for
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 job, a reference
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 from one of my tutors is essential, as well. So I would be extremely grateful if you could write about my character and perseverance at school.
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, I suppose your outlook toward my attitudes and
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 to learn would be very helpful to be mentioned. Thanks a lot for your contribution on
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 matter, I am eagerly looking forward to
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 from you. Yours sincerely
Firi
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Fire
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task achievement
Consider providing a brief summary of your accomplishments or experiences that relate to the position you are applying for. This will help the teacher provide a more personalized reference.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea related to your request. This can clarify your points and enhance readability.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for a request for a reference.
complete response
The job interest and its relevance to your career plans are well articulated.
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