Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#controls #media #attitudes #people

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

These days,

due to

Linking Words

technological development, there are many historical documentary

films

Use synonyms

which have lack historical accuracy. A part of our society believes that

this

Linking Words

false information about the past is effective for students. I strongly disagree with

this

Linking Words

point of view, because imprecise knowledge from series and

films

Use synonyms

can be improved the stereotype of history in learners and can give them wrong data that they do not need. And in

this

Linking Words

essay

Add a comma

,essay

show examples

I would like to explain why I do not agree with

this

Linking Words

view.

Firstly

Linking Words

, many of the current historical motion pictures provide some materials for giving them new knowledge, but not all of them are historically correct.

Therefore

Linking Words

, individuals have wrong data and use the inaccurately, respectively.

For instance

Linking Words

, graduates of universities should collect their reports and a lot of advice for presentations, for

this

Linking Words

, they need to look for resources

such

Linking Words

films

Use synonyms

and TV shows.

However

Linking Words

, if documentary

films

Use synonyms

do have not definite details, it means that individuals will apply them wrongly. Turning to the other hand argument, there are

also

Linking Words

benefits to

this

Linking Words

for others. Because even if people see the wrong movie, they will not see the wrong topic, of course. And they are pretty keen on the movie they are watching, they are interested in that history, dive into that topic and learn it completely, they can correct the mistakes, they have learned. And

also

Linking Words

it helps people to have historical knowledge.

To sum up

Linking Words

, others think that

films

Use synonyms

and tv-shows are precise resources for learning history. Personally, I believe that they are not because documentary

films

Use synonyms

are created for general presentation and entertainment.

In addition

Linking Words

, they give unuseful and wrong material to those who need facts.

Submitted by abrorjon_1995 on Mon Mar 13 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

10
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

285 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5.5
band
In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In many countries private healthcare is the norm whereas in others it is provided by the government free of charge. Many people think that the latter should be adopted across the world. I would agree with this sentiment and would argue that universal access to healthcare should be seen as a human right.
5.5
band
The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, working at this time is becoming harder due to the company's compulsory, While it is a commonly held belief that employees should reword with longer weekends as their hard-working. There is also an argument that opposes it. From my perspective, I consider that workers should take more vacations to improve their mental health.
7.5
band
Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
One of the social concerns today relates to whether each person becomes more dependent on each other or becomes increasingly independent in the modern world. While it is widely believed that we are more dependent on each other others believe people have become more independent. I’m going to discuss these opposing points of view.
7.5
band
In many countries around the world, obesity is increasing, especially among children. One solution is to increase the tax on food and drinks which contain large amounts of sugar. How effective is this solution? What other measures would be effective?
In contemporary times, some health problems, such as obesity gradually become serious. Therefore, increasing the tax on high levels of sugary foods and drinks may be a solution. However, in this essay, I contend that this measure cannot address these issues thoroughly. Instead, teaching children how to cultivate correct eating habits might be an advisable method.
7.5
band
you recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you return home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: * say where you think you left the papers * explain why they are so important * tell the manager what you want him/her to do
I recently participated in a conference at your hotel and unfortunately, I inadvertently left some confidential paperwork behind.

Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries around the world, obesity is increasing, especially among children. One solution is to increase the tax on food and drinks which contain large amounts of sugar. How effective is this solution? What other measures would be effective?