In some cultures, childrens are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

There is no doubt that the globalised society has been affecting millions of

children

in several ways

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these days

. The notion

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if kids push themselves hard, they are able to achieve anything they desire.

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and

then

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drawbacks of

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To begin

with, it is believed by parents that their offsprings are possible to thrive in a variety

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goals at

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different

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stages

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of

life

. To put it simply, most families can assist their

children

to excel at something, if they have

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proper preparation when they are at the young

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.

For example

, certain skills could be obtained by learning or

practicing

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, as many believe that practice makes perfect.

Therefore

, more and more adolescents are likely to work extremely hard on something because they strongly hold a belief in a better outcome.

On the contrary

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due to

the competitive society,

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has led a great number of today's

children

to become lost and

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exhausted

.

For

this

reason, teenagers may find their lives terribly overwhelming when it comes to

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opportunity

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,

such

as highly competitive entrance

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examinations

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and academic competitions.

Furthermore

, nowadays, a lot of adolescents are prone to become

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stressed

out and depressed,

according to

scientific research, which can have a

long term

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effect in the future. In some cases, some

children

cannot live a normal

life

because of the idea of

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exerting

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themselves

too much. In conclusion, even though being well-prepared for

life

circumstances is beneficial for kids,

this

tends to cause

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issues,

such

as depression,

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stress

, and failure as well.