A builder has recently completed some renovation at your house, but you are not satisfied with his work. Write a letter to him. In your letter:  Tell him what work has not been completed properly  Tell him what you want him to do  Suggest some time when you will be available at home

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Dear Mr Robert, I am writing to complain about my unsatisfactory with the reconstruction of the kitchen which has not been done completely. As per your information, you finished the kitchen modification

last

week, but I was surprised after seeing the location on my yesterday's visit. The cabinets should be in your scope as per the contract, but it is not been installed yet. So, I would like to request you review the contract once again and install the kitchen cabinets.

However

, if you need more financial help, let me know. because still 10%

last

payment is balanced to pay.

Finally

This

time, I want you to install cabinets under my supervision. Next week on the 25th of march, I will be off duty for six days. so, please arrange the materials in advance to start the work on that day. I hope you will take my letter as a priority and confirm the installation date. Yours sincerely, Mandeep Singh

Submitted by mandeepsinghsony2022 on Mon Mar 13 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

160 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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