Nowadays, we can watch entertainment performance on the screen and no need to watch it live. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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the development of technology, we can enjoy most

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activities through the screen and no need to go outside as we did in the past.

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, there are certain aspects that watching online can not bring to the audience,

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statement. It cannot

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that watching

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performances online has its outstanding advantages. First of all, it gives people a comfortable zone to enjoy the shows.

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, we can sit on the sofa with a popcorn bag and watch a Netflix movie on the TV's big screen,

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of going to the cinema. It will ensure an extremely satisfying feeling for the audience.

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, we can save money for those activities if we watch them online. By using technology devices at home like televisions, and smartphones, viewers will have full-watching experiences with less amount of money than enjoying them in person.

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some disadvantages that are not able to

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to the viewers. Even though watching online

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its own benefits, it cannot replace the direct watching method for some reasons.

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, watching the performances live will offer a realistic feeling to the audience. For me, coming to the venue and enjoying the

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show are the ideal ways to immerse in

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and the air of the concert,

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. On top of that, it offers chances to meet new friends and form new relationships. There are so many people who become best friends after watching the shows together

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and strengthen their friendship through the same activities.

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but not least, it can be seen as a way to support your idols to continue working in the

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industry. Buying a

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concert ticket and coming to enjoy the live show are some effective ways to cheer the artists up and support them

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. In conclusion, I only agree with

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opinion partly after considering the benefits and drawbacks of it. On top of that, choosing any type of

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entertainment

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performances

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on each person's personality and purpose.