In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Having easy access to
food
and drinks produced in foreign countries
has become quite common among citizens
in countries
all over the world. Therefore
, it has some financial benefits and provides a wide range of choices. This
essay will discuss how this
phenomenon makes people's lives easier, also
, strengthens the connection between different cultures.
To begin
with, human beings always have desires to taste something special, so, they have new experiences that give them pleasure. However
, if humans had had to go through hundreds of kilometres to taste delicious products from foreign countries
, they would have wasted their time and money. Obviously, companies have more consumers around the world by providing easy access to their food
, thus
, it is financially beneficial both for foreign citizens
and food
factories. For instance
, after the Dubai chocolate factories had filled the store shelves, Dubai chocolate in my country, the popularity has risen among local citizens
and factories could increase
profits by 20%.
Wrong verb form
increased
Food
and drinks from foreign countries
often reflect their cultures, so, it might interest local citizens
. Therefore
, cookers can find new supplements and build imaginations about foreigners' eating habits. New ideas appeared after
this
kind of support. For example
, my mum adds a catalyzer, which makes the cooking process of cookies and pies fast. She found out about this
catalyzer in a local supermarket and it is produced in Georgia and tastes very delicious and economies time.
In conclusion, the network between countries
might be set up by exchanging food
and drinks. Also
, this
simple method has a financial advantage which makes lives easier.Submitted by nurali_serik on
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The essay presents clear ideas about financial benefits and cultural exchange opportunities related to the accessibility of foreign food products.
task achievement
The use of a personal example helps to illustrate the point about economic benefits and helps to engage the reader.
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