convenience food will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace the traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?
Nowadays, traditional
foods
and ways of food
preparation eventually
changed Add a missing verb
are eventually
by
Change preposition
to
convenience
food
, because it will became
common Change the verb form
become
food
for people
. I agree with this
opinion,
because Remove the comma
apply
convenience
food
easier
preparation to Add a missing verb
is easier
cook
and easier to find rather than traditional food
.
In my opinion, people
change from traditional foods
to convenience
foods
because the methods of preparation is
easier. Most Change the verb form
are
people
can cook
convenience
food
easily, since the material is common, also
by simple instruction. To cook
convenience
food
product
, Fix the agreement mistake
products
such
as,
instant Remove the comma
apply
noodle
, spaghetti, and fried rice just Fix the agreement mistake
noodles
by
four Change preposition
apply
and
five steps in 15-30 minutes. Different Correct word choice
or
with of
traditional Change preposition
from
foods
, the methods are difficult and complicate
. Wrong verb form
complicated
For instance
, to
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cooking
cook
gudeg; the one of
traditional Change preposition
apply
food
in Yogyakarta, it
takes times 2 and 3 days. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Furthermore
, the steps are very difficult and complicate
, like Change the form of the verb
complicated
people
needs
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need
know
the colour and the smell of the gudeg if done, just Fix the infinitive
to know
few
Change the article
a few
people
know and understanding
Change the form of the verb
understand
about
the steps. So, most Change preposition
apply
people
change the regular food
by
Change preposition
to
convenience
foods
.
The second reason, convenience
Add a missing verb
is convenience
food
easily find in any locations
, like in the downtown, suburban, or village. Every Fix the agreement mistake
location
shops
have Change to a singular noun
shop
convenience
food
like instant noodle and spaghetti. For traditional foods
, sometimes the material is difficult to find. The Gudeg’s material it
easily find in Yogyakarta, but in Correct your spelling
is
another location
sometimes is difficult, because the tree of Fix the agreement mistake
other locations
gudeg’s
material cannot grow in that Correct your spelling
judge’s
locations
.
Fix the agreement mistake
location
To conclude
, people
change from traditional foods
to convenience
food
because it easier
to Add a missing verb
is easier
cook
and find in any locations
, but traditional Fix the agreement mistake
location
food
is still important,
since Remove the comma
apply
it
Change the pronoun
its
part
of the culture. So, some Add a missing verb
is part
people
still cook
traditional foods
in
special occasions like Change preposition
on
wedding
and family Fix the agreement mistake
weddings
holiday
.Fix the agreement mistake
holidays
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