some people like to spend their liesure time after work with their coworkers while others like to keep their private life separate from work. Discuss both sides.

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for every worker in their free

time

, whether they will take a break with other

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or do their own agenda. Spare

time

to relax from

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is indispensable,

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the

time

by

gather

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with friends is a good choice.

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doing personal is

also

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a necessity

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necessity

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to upgrade

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.

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aside

time

with people sometimes is a must and significant, particularly for

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the worker

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worker

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.

By

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join

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it can create

wider

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connection.

For example

, as

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a newbie

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newbie

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by

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spending

time

with their

senior

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it

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can be as bounding

each

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other

even

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sometimes build

a

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opportunity for new

relation

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.

Therefore

, as long as know the aim of

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or someone who

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there it does not matter and take chance to link with everyone. Getting a job is the first step to

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professional, it is mean that someone still

need

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to intensify their capability.

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kind of thing can be attained by

use

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their leisure

time

to gain more knowledge in their scope skill.

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, the unoccupied

time

can be

use

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for

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benefit

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thing

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by

learn

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or

participate

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in

certain

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a certain

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class

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.

Thus

, leisure

time

is not

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must

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for coworkers

due to

culture or anything else,

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the employee

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employee

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employees

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may utilize for themselves.

To sum

up

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this

discussion, take a part in any event or just in leisure

time

with other fellow

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is a great alternative or make a strong

relation

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.

However

,

selftime

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self-time

self time

is not less notable especially if it is for

self development

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.

Hence

both

of

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side is noteworthy and should be balanced.