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The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
#water #usage #san #diego #california #rest #world
This
 pie chart depicts compare
water
 usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.It is clear from the graph
that is
 the most uses
water
 between
three
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region
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regions
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.
According to
 what is shown,we can see San Diego the residential
have
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 a big ratio using
water
60
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% and industry
have
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 23% and the
Agricultre
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Agriculture
 have 17%.
While
the
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apply
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California the residential have a big proportion using
water
 39%
and
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the industry
have
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33% and
Agricultre
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Agriculture
have
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28%.
the
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worldwide
the
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apply
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Agricultre
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Agriculture
 have a huge proportion using
water
 69% and the industry have 23% and
the
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residential
have
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has
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 8%.
To sum up
,we could say that
the
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worldwide
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 has
a
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the
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bigest
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 ratio for using
water
 between San Diego with California.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • households
  • significant
  • industrial use
  • implications
  • agriculture
  • geographical
  • climatic
  • economic factors
  • patterns
  • sustainability
  • practices
  • surprising
  • exceptionally
  • improvements
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