Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating to the environment, population and education as well . What problems will your country face in the next 10 years? How can these problems be overcome

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in the rural area reduce.still not getting workers from the agricultural
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of peoples will struggle on the food the government should forecast the issue and proper remedies
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been followed. 70percentage of my country's GDP is given by the agricultural
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