The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagram provides information regarding the adjustments that have been made to the Queen Mary Hospital from the year 1960 to 2000.

Overall

, notable changes

such

as the replacement of the shopping

centre

and farmland for a

cancer

centre

, nursing school and pharmacy have been made between the initial construction and the period around 1980. Later on, in the following

years

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,years

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there is no significant difference, but the expansion of the

cancer

centre

. In the depiction of the hospital in 1960, there is a clear division of proportion between the institutions.

In addition

, the two objects on the southern side of the road are completely demolished

further

on. These are

then

replaced by the construction of a

cancer

treatment facility and a nursing school,

as well as

a pharmacy connected to the hospital itself in 1980. There are some changes made in 2000, which is

due to

the expansion of the

cancer

centre

. Not only is the space of the nursing school notably decreased, but

also

the parking space is significantly adjusted.

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The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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