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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the the advantages of this situation out weight the disadvantages?

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There is no denying the fact that the main impact of
increasing
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 elderly
population
 is arguable.
While
 it is a commonly held belief that the elderly
plays
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 a significant role in our community.
However
, in recent days, the percentage of youngsters
have
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has
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 become higher than the number of elderly.
This
 essay will shed light
both
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advantage
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advantages
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 and
disadvantages
 of
such
trend
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a trend
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. On the one hand, there are masses who argue that the benefits of
large
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a large
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 proportion of young
adult
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adults
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 in
compasion
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comparison
compassion
to
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for
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 older people considerably outweigh its
disadvantages
. The main reason
of
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for
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 believing
this
 is because
young
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the young
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 may work more than
elderly
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the elderly
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.
For instance
, in some
occupation
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occupations
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, young
adult
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adults
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 can work more effectively than older people in
the
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hard
jobs
 that take longer time
such
 as driving a train or working as a doctor.
Thus
, it becomes apparent that
elderly
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the elderly
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 might be unable to perform
such
 critical
jobs
 effectively because they will be tired to perform
such
jobs
,
while
youngster
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youngsters
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 can perform the job in a perfect way which may help in
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the nation
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nation
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national
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 economic development. `
On the other hand
, others argued that
aged
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the aged
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 masses might be more useful than
adult
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the adult
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population
.
Therefore
, having
low
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a low
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 percentage of
older
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the older
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population
 might bring many
disadvantages
. To embark,
older
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the older
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population
 may play a critical role as they hold the experience and
wise
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wisdom
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 that young
adult
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adults
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require
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 in
the
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their
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jobs
.
Moreover
, the community needs
large
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a large
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 amount of aged individuals to teach
the
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apply
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society about tradition, heritage and belief, so the community can save their identity. Indeed, the nation may seem will lose if the proportion of aged folks
less
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is less
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 than young
adult
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adults
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. In conclusion, in my opinion, I consider that the benefits of having
higher
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a higher
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 percentage of aged folks considerably outweigh its
disadvantages
.
This
 is because the elderly may help the nation to keep its identity.
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