At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the the advantages of this situation out weight the disadvantages?

There is no denying the fact that the main impact of

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elderly

population

is arguable.

While

it is a commonly held belief that the elderly

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a significant role in our community.

However

, in recent days, the percentage of youngsters

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become higher than the number of elderly.

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essay will shed light

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advantage

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advantages

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and

disadvantages

of

such

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. On the one hand, there are masses who argue that the benefits of

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proportion of young

adult

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adults

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in

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comparison

compassion

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older people considerably outweigh its

disadvantages

. The main reason

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believing

this

is because

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the young

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may work more than

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the elderly

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.

For instance

, in some

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occupations

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, young

adult

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adults

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can work more effectively than older people in

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hard

jobs

that take longer time

such

as driving a train or working as a doctor.

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, it becomes apparent that

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the elderly

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might be unable to perform

such

critical

jobs

effectively because they will be tired to perform

such

jobs

,

while

youngster

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can perform the job in a perfect way which may help in

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the nation

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economic development. `

On the other hand

, others argued that

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the aged

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masses might be more useful than

adult

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the adult

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population

.

Therefore

, having

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percentage of

older

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the older

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population

might bring many

disadvantages

. To embark,

older

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the older

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population

may play a critical role as they hold the experience and

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that young

adult

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adults

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require

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in

the

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jobs

.

Moreover

, the community needs

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amount of aged individuals to teach

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society about tradition, heritage and belief, so the community can save their identity. Indeed, the nation may seem will lose if the proportion of aged folks

less

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is less

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than young

adult

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adults

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. In conclusion, in my opinion, I consider that the benefits of having

higher

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percentage of aged folks considerably outweigh its

disadvantages

.

This

is because the elderly may help the nation to keep its identity.