Nowadays media should include more good news in there publication. Do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reason from your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge and experience.

The issue of whether or not
news
outlets should
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emphasis
emphasise
more on good
news
has become the subject of debate over the past few decades, with people becoming increasingly exposed to
news
around the globe.
Although
there is some valid argument in the favor of placing importance on bad
news
, I believe
news
agencies and the media should not solely cover tragic
news
. It is an indisputable fact that people in
this
modern era are overwhelmed with tragic
news
globally. Despite the potential benefits,
such
as raising awareness and preparedness among the general population, being prone to a significant amount of bad
news
throughout the day is widely believed to be a major contributing factor to the increased level of emotional distress among individuals. Being exposed to too much tragic
news
, one would feel sadness, frustration, and anxiety
instead
of becoming prepared in case of a similar situation
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in the media. As
such
, they are more likely to withdraw from social interactions or feel disconnected from others, eventually becoming socially isolated. One who constantly follows
news
regarding government officials' corruption,
for instance
, finds it difficult, if not impossible, to trust the government and society and, in turn, refrain from relating to people and would contribute less positively to
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society. Were the media
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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