Some people say that nowadays children have too much freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that nowadays youngsters have too much licence to behave how they like. I totally agree with

this

view, because I think that more discipline should be imposed for the benefit and protection of

children

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. There are dangers in the current tendency in many schools to allow

children

to have too much

freedom

.

While

some traditional ideas of schooling have been dismissed,

such

as harsh corporal punishment, not all change is for the better. When the authority of the teacher is undermined,

then

no learning takes place in the classroom. Lessons are sometimes disrupted by students shouting, running around or playing with their mobile phones. Unpunished, pupils fall behind

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their studies and fail to make the grade when they sit exams.

Therefore

, to maintain educational standards, the schoolchildren of today should be given less

freedom

to behave as they like. In the

home

, parental involvement is often too lax in the upbringing of

children

. Without

this

supervision,

children

nowadays easily fall into juvenile crime and anti-social behaviour

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or are preyed on by evil people on social networking sites. All these are major issues,

for example

, in UK society. In the past, many parents may have been overprotective, but today’s

children

are too often allowed to spend money and time unsupervised.

Although

I agree that youngsters should be allowed some

freedom

of choice during their formative years, strict rules are lacking at

home

.

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few parents impose responsible patterns of behaviour

such

as regular bedtimes, times for homework and the need for

children

to inform parents of where they

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what they are doing. In conclusion,

children

today have been given too much

freedom

to behave as they like at school and

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