A friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •Offer to find somewhere to stay •Advise about what to do •Give information about what clothes to bring
Dear John,
How are you doing? I hope you are doing well. I am so delighted you are going to visit my region. As you know, you are coming here in high season,
therefore
you may encounter some difficulties in finding an appropriate place to stay. I can offer you to come here and stay with me. However
, if you want to stay somewhere else, I will suggest a reputable traditional hotel that is
located in the best place in the city. The price is fairly reasonable and in comparison with the services they offer, it is a good bargain. Moreover
, access to public transport is facile as well as
going to tourist attractions is possible on foot.
As you may know, here is reputable for its ancient sites and buildings. So, I strongly recommend you to visit these locales. Furthermore
, last
year, a water museum was opened downtown. I think it can fascinate you. In addition
, there are several shops in the main bazaar and I suppose some of them will catch your eye. You can find cheap and flamboyant souvenirs there.
My city is a traditional city that is
located in the heart of the country besieged by some deserts. As a result
, the temperature gap between day and night is considerable. I think you should bring some warm clothes for the nights, nevertheless
for the days you can wear a T-shirt. I was about to forget about shoes. Please bring a pair of comfortable sneakers with you as you should probably walk for long hours.
Feel free to ask for more information.
Sincerely yours,
DaveSubmitted by TUTOO on
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coherence cohesion
While the logical structure is strong, it can be further improved by using more transitional words or phrases to guide the reader smoothly from one idea to the next.
coherence cohesion
Use clear paragraph breaks to ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea or piece of advice. This will improve readability and coherence.
task achievement
The response comprehensively addresses all parts of the task, providing detailed advice and information.
task achievement
The tone is suitable and friendly, befitting a letter to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The letter opens and closes appropriately, creating a positive and engaging impression.
coherence cohesion
The logical flow of the letter is good, making it easy to follow the writer's points.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite